Like

• Love the energy throughout
• Love the beginning
• Love the day title cards

Work On?

• Maybe more music that is different
• Try to make it more clear that it was the first game
• Maybe make it more clear what is happened? (I’m the guy with the green highlight, screen turns dark, I’m dead)
• Maybe explain my strategies in improving in league more? (Practice tool)
• Maybe explain how league works more? (Explain mini games)
• Break up the footage or shorten it more, might be slow at times.
• Maybe explain that it was a two day challenge earlier?

Specifics

1. 0:05 better grade
2. 0:19 better grade, harder cutting
3. 0:32 harder cutting, feels slow
4. 0:53 timing feels off, out of sync with music
5. 1:41 great energy but need something to transition better
6. 8:30 more kinetic editing on final words
7. 2:48 need to fade sound out from voice to cut off extra words

Thoughts

• Need to draw inspiration from other league youtubers who post highlights (maybe Professor Akali?)
• Take a step back, and work on something else for a bit, maybe my business idea. Need some time away to see what I want to do next clearly.
• Get specific feedback from multiple people.

Gameplan

Overall, I feel like this is an excellent rough cut, great pacing and energy but it lacks polish.

To work on the polish I will:

• Break down portions I need to work on and split them out to perfect them
• Work with my brother or someone else by my side in order to make it easier